Baked or friedAlways sunnysideA dozen multiplied
Not eggzactly: sunnysideMore eggzactly: side-by-side
Their shadows give the illusionThey rise above their bowling laneWith shoulders in protrusionPins hoping to score, points to gain
This "bowling lane" poem is better than the "walk/run" poem.Do you agree? This is Anonymous Art Critic #37.5Call me Opy Nyunmyne.
Doesn't take much————la Puttane
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Baked or fried
ReplyDeleteAlways sunnyside
A dozen multiplied
Not eggzactly: sunnyside
DeleteMore eggzactly: side-by-side
Their shadows give the illusion
DeleteThey rise above their bowling lane
With shoulders in protrusion
Pins hoping to score, points to gain
This "bowling lane" poem is better
Deletethan the "walk/run" poem.
Do you agree?
This is Anonymous Art Critic #37.5
Call me Opy Nyunmyne.
Doesn't take much
Delete————la Puttane
Ms. Puttane
DeleteAre you another "commentista concubine?"
Are you possibly a man?
Are you acquainted with Ms. Petard?