© Oliverio Bayside Peninsula |
People walk
People run
People eat eggs
Eggs can roll
Eggs can run
Sometimes,
They just
lie in the sun
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© Oliverio Bayside Peninsula |
Baked or fried
ReplyDeleteAlways sunnyside
A dozen multiplied
Not eggzactly: sunnyside
DeleteMore eggzactly: side-by-side
Their shadows give the illusion
DeleteThey rise above their bowling lane
With shoulders in protrusion
Pins hoping to score, points to gain
This "bowling lane" poem is better
Deletethan the "walk/run" poem.
Do you agree?
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Ms. Puttane
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Are you acquainted with Ms. Petard?