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Complete undivided attention
releases tension
on ignorance
But there's no chance
complete undivided attention
(which I did already mention)
could be
a 21st century dance
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© HOODA HELAMI ©
Alter Ego #142857
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What the hell is happening with Hooda?
ReplyDeleteWith a weed whacker, this cumbersome poem
could have been a sonnet.
As for concise, profound HELAMI-ism,
DeleteOliverio prefers the following:
Complete undivided attention died
the day texting was born